I can not say whats wrong about it since I dont understand it, the entire paper is written in a random random style And since I am a really nice kind guy and usually try hard to understand things, I can conclude that the paper is badly written, and, therefore, the author is mediocre, since talented people write good papers ) And then since he is a mediocre guy, the entire statement Telegram makes about superiority of their things is really a sick, sick thing.
When people really invent something new, they are usually able to explain this in simple, clear terms. Einstein’s thesis was just two pages, he got a Nobel Prize for it