If I'd been the one to write the post, I wouldn't have used "the" in the 3rd paragraph. And wouldn't have used "will" after "hope" in the last one.. But that's IMHO..
Damn man, I guess you gotta learn some English first before you come over to criticize others. :)) Those that you mentioned are all 100% idiomatic. This’s the way a native speaker would put it. "The perfect place" is freaking idiomatic and "I hope you'll enjoy" is also idiomatic